Knights of Micro Fiction is a bloghop hosted by Kathy (Imagine Today) and Jessica (Write. Skate. Dream) on the 15th of every month. They came up with it as a way to meet new friends, help build the blogosphere and (hopefully) spark some creativity. So, here's the prompt:
In 300 words or less write a scene where the main character realizes he/she is thankful for something. Include the words "turkey" and "Mayflower" (this could be May flowers too or other creative variations).
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The Chase
I squinted into the bright glare of the sun, the weather
sending comfortable warmth all over me after the torrential cold rain of the
South. Adjusting my black non-shiny leather jacket, cross checking all papers
and ID, I flagged down a cab from right out of the airport.
“Where to, ma’am?” the cabbie questioned through his interior
rear-view mirror.
“Minion Street, the Blake Fair entrance”
“Straight away? No hotel?”
Quite hospitable, these Northerners. “No. Straight
away.”
An hour to pass. I used the time to pore over the papers the
big baboon had stupidly handed over. Best (or worst?) thing about keeping
important documents with partners-in-crime who’re natural boasters, they give
the secret away soon. Don’t need much effort. A bit of smart talk would do. There
was just one nagging thought, a code he didn’t reveal, without which we might
just lose the game. It was 18 hours to Monday.
My phone beeped a call from base. Frank.
“Hey Frank”
“Hey. A half hour to target? You remember what he described?”
I couldn’t help smiling, despite the nerves. He’s as smart
as one could get. I remembered the baboon talking through a mouthful of turkey
leg, “You gotta find ‘im at the fair. Big as a buck, wavy black hair, wheat-skin
Asian.”
“Yes” I breathed into the receiver. “But there could be
anyone who fits the description.”
Frank smiled. I knew it, because of the pause and his
breathing.
“Tell me Frank, what is it?”
“I got the code.”
A gasp escaped me. “What!”
It filled me with happiness. Mostly as I could connect. It
was going to be easy. Look for a big guy with a mayflower, easy to spot.
Mayflowers don’t grow up here. I’ll find him, show the papers, police ID, my
name: Mayflower. Pretty.
Busted.
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That was really fun! If you're interested in participating, follow the links to the hosts' blogs and join in the hop! :)
Wow that was really very well written Ashna..enjoyed reading it!
ReplyDeleteI loved the detailed descriptions you have given to minute things here in the story..:)
:D I'm glad you found it that way. Thank you!! :D
DeleteHi Ashna, there seems to be a problem with your blog - I can't read the writing, the colourful books take up all the page.
ReplyDeleteOh no. :/ That happens in some browsers. The same thing happens when I try opening it from the college computers, but I thought that's because blogspot is not allowed. :|
DeleteI'll go through the settings again. Thanks for letting me know!
Hi Ashna thanks for joining us. Great post. I like how the tension is building as she's in the car and we find out she is looking for someone.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much! :)
DeleteWOW Ashna! That is just wow, I'll have to go back to the story class now. Really, none of my long-like-a-giraffe's-neck stories could match to this. I am totally and very pleasantly amazed :D
ReplyDeleteI'm sure you're winning :D
Your comment is one big morale booster! :D Thanks. But hey, I can't match your stories, okay? :)
DeleteFor the most part it was very well-written. Nice.
ReplyDeleteThanks for dropping by! :)
DeleteVery nicely written, I liked the idea but the dates have passes. I will participate next month. I liked the plot you build up specially all the characters. :) I think your entry is a sure shot win :D
ReplyDeleteThanks Tanya! I'll be looking forward to see your participation next time :D
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